Monday, March 21, 2011

eternal wait !!


i waited for you...
hoping for you to be real someday,
believing that destiny has this meeting in store for us,
i waited for you..
to let you in,
completely and deeply in,
to understand my impulsive instincts,
to accept me for my candidness,
i waited for you..
to accept my selfish mean and stupid talks,
and yet understand that i mean none of them,
to love me the same at my worst,
to read my mind better than me,
i waited for u..
to have faith in me,
to stand by my side whatever the case may be,
to be my pillar of strength when i was falling apart,
to be my armour  in the times of trouble,
i waited for u..
to treat me as a child,
to listen to all my cribbing and responding with just a little smile, 
to love me without judging me,
to measure my heart not my words,
i waited for u..
to be a gentle touch of air when i am not in the best of my moods,
to be the rain on a scorching sunny day,
to see through me as if seeing through a glass,
to see into my eyes and radiate positivity into my being,
i waited for u..
to cast a magical spell with your soothing words,
to be my hope when i was overshadowed with dark dispair,
to not move away if i told u to stop,
to come in close to embrace me into your arms forever,
i waited for u..
to love me as i was,
to hold on to me forever...
n here i am today..
with my last breaths on,
and yet the wait is not over,
may be it has always been about me,
may be i never gave it a thought to what u might have wanted from me,
but my faith is still undying,
may be i'll come here again,
to meet u someday,...
so i'll sleep in peace 
and still waiting for u....


12 comments:

  1. Hey, Hi
    well thats a real nice song that you have woven...liked the flow of it...and the hope it portrays...nice. sweet.

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  2. Where were you when I was burned and broken
    While the days slipped by from my window watching
    And where were you when I was hurt and I was helpless
    Because the things you say and the things you do surround me
    While you were hanging yourself on someone else's words
    Dying to believe in what you heard
    I was staring straight into the shining sun

    I took a heavenly ride through our silence
    I knew the moment had arrived
    For killing the past and coming back to life

    ~Pink Floyd

    Because no one shall go unanswered, or truly denied.

    Nice one.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  3. 'beautiful' is the word....esp liked the line 'may be i never gave it a thought to what u might have wanted from me' :)

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  4. amazing work! lets hope the person proves worth the wait. :)

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  5. To see through me as if saying through a glass...

    wonderful lines !!!!

    I almost cried reading it...

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  6. @eon heath thanx dear!
    @anshul thanx!
    @saumya thanku so much! :) yup what u might have wanted from me ;)
    @mehak thankuuuu!! n ofcourse the person will be worth the wait :);)
    @nikita u r jst amazin! :) thanku so much!!

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  7. The wait..can be long.
    But, it's worth it! :)

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  8. Megharana,

    Won't it be heavenly bliss if one finds such a partner? It is worth waiting but unfortunately such person exists only in dreams. So if someone meets many of such hopes, one should settle for that. Now on composition, very beautifully hopes of a person brought out.

    Take care

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  9. Loved it.

    "may be i'll come here again,
    to meet u someday,...
    so i'll sleep in peace"

    This line has a deeper meaning, isn't it?

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  10. Beautiful lines, Megha. Thanks for showing me the way to your blog. :)
    At death-bed, I wish no one dies like this - waiting and unfulfilled wishes in the bag.

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  11. @punam: thanks dear! yeah i wish that too :)

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    that great wish
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