Saturday, September 4, 2010

the silence is broken!

No more caste systems ,Sir names completely abolished,A world which is not called man's world  where chivalry would undo male chauvinism completely and entirely, there are no female feticides, A world where racism has come to an end , where religion is spirituality and the basis of existence is humanity, where people live in compete harmony, A world where weapons are replaced by the garlands to greet everyone with a warm heart, where the wars have lost their existence, n there is a peaceful coexistence , no more terror, no more honor killings, no more crimes ,no more corruption, secularism in true sense, independence in true sense, no vulnerbility in characters, no double crossings................................
everything perfect, everything at place, headstrong characters, dynamic youth, honesty and integrity first choice,sense of responsibility, morality above the crisp currency, cooperation and working mutually for common benefits, rising together, developing in all horizons, expanding and taking roots as strong n genuine individuals and striving for perfection................
this kind of world i see in my dreams . then i wake up and i realize what i am contributing ?
and there is nothing beyond this question mark that i am contributing. I have only posed questions the unanswered questions which i expect somebody to answer and that somebody who it should be ?am i not too oblivious?
and dat is when i realize what it needs...it needs the silence of my conscience to be broken. when the conscience will speak the deeds will follow. i think i need to wakeup from that deep slumber that i am resting in to realize that the silence is broken
p.s: This is a 10DOM Magpie Tale under the muse the silence lies broken.

20 comments:

  1. reminds me of a poem I read in school...

    Dharti ko hum kaante chhaante, to us amber ko bhi baantein.
    ek anal hai, ek salil hai, ek anil sanchaar...
    kaho tumhari janm bhoomi ka hai kitna vistaar?
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    .
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    Vishva rajya jo lok tantra hai,
    har jaati ka har bhaanti ka ek jahaan adhikaar,
    kaho tumhaari janm bhoomi ka hai kitna vistaar?


    Interesting thought and as you have said it, we need to break that silence of conscience.

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  2. and there is nothing beyond this question mark that i am contributing. I have only posed questions the unanswered questions which i expect somebody to answer and that somebody who it should be ?am i not too oblivious?
    and dat is when i realize what it needs...it needs the silence of my conscience to be broken. when the conscience will speak the deeds will follow. i think i need to wakeup from that deep slumber that i am resting in to realize that the silence is broken

    Very well said!!
    This is all what is required...

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  3. maybe someday in a perfect world. I like the picture, too.

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  4. hmmm.. perfect world is where we all are try to be perfect. nice blog

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  5. Seems like a perfect picture, with overwhelming symmetry! :)

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  6. an intriguing write...i would echo your sentiments.if only more silence were broken...i do really like the picture as well...

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  7. 'it neeeds the silence of my consciense to be broken'

    So well said.

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  8. The words paint well, but the structure hurts my brain and makes me not want to read it. Sorry. I'd love to see this exact same piece formatted differently. I think it could be great.

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  9. i like the picture..and your words add much. it is not a perfect world though and we deal with it as we can. perhaps in writing it we make it more so.

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  10. We all pose questions and expect others to answer them for us - usually a government. We should start providing our own answers.

    I think you could edit this a bit to be more effective. Set it out differently. It appears slack. Make it appear more deliberate.

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  11. Good point. If more people asked themselves what they were contributing, and if they were satisfied with the answers given by others, perhaps things might begin to move in the right direction.

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  12. The John Lennon song, Imagine, comes to mind.

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  13. "it needs the silence of my conscience to be broken." And, the ability to shove the ego into the abyss.

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  14. I think I had this conversation over coffee the other day with someone...yeah, I think I did...

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  15. truly so....as they say....you have to be the change you wanna see

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  16. Truly this would be a perfect world but I wonder about perfection. To achieve a perfect world what would we have to give up.

    Tolerance is the best we can hope for and peace.

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  17. इस बदलाव की पहल स्वंय से करनी होगी और सच मानिये कि जब आप स्वंय के विचार उसी तरह कर लेंगी जैसा आप चाहती हैं तो आने वाली नस्ल को कुछ अच्छा देकर जाएँगी....बदलाव रातों-रात नहीं आते....उनमें संघर्ष, समय और इच्छाशक्ति लगती है

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  18. Is dere some sort of contagious disease!! lately I have been reading a lot where ppl are talking abt awakening up and giving back to society.. good to hear that ppl have started thinking about it atleast..:)

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